One Pre-Long Distance Relationship Evening


One Pre-Long Distance Relationship Evening

I could hear nothing but the crickets.
It's this time of the night that I am alive.

Not tonight, though.
He's with me, but not tonight.

I could hear nothing but my hearbeat.
It's one of these moments that it goes faster.

Not this time, though.
He's beside me, but not this time.

I could hear nothing but the loneliness in his voice.
It's a voice that could feather-tickle my heart.

Not this voice, though.
He's speaking, but not in that voice.

*This was a poetry prompt from Magpie Tales.

8 dropped their thoughts:

Macherie | August 8, 2011 at 3:22 AM

uhmm.. long distance relationship is really hard. I do love the this site look, wish I would learn how to pattern the free layout. its a big pain in the ass.hehehe

Miss `Chievous | August 8, 2011 at 5:09 AM

Yes, it is. But I'm up for it. Thanks, mach! You could try searching on btemplates.com. They've got tons. Editing it will test your patience, but the result is oh so good! :)

Brian Miller | August 8, 2011 at 5:58 AM

interesting, like the solidarity of her heart...with one but knows it is not the other...even if the other is just a voice right now...long distance love is surely hard...

Berowne | August 8, 2011 at 12:36 PM

Creative, imaginative take on the prompt...

Everyday Goddess | August 8, 2011 at 7:44 PM

together and alone, sometimes love is like that. nice magpie!

Mary | August 9, 2011 at 2:48 PM

..'a voice that could feather tickle my heart' ..I like it.
Lovely Magpie tale.

Helen | August 11, 2011 at 4:01 PM

I'm trying to recall if my heart has ever been feather tickled by a voice ... By George, I believe it has!

Donna B | August 14, 2011 at 9:53 AM

ooooh.. I could FEEL this. Excellent!

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