A Distressed Dramatical



Right Brain.                    Left Brain.
Tick tock. Tick tock.
Write.                                         Create.
Tick tock. Tick tock.
Prose.                                                                    Technical.
Tick tock. Tick tock.
Pleasure.                                     Sacrifice.
Tick tock. Tick tock.
Eros.                                  Storge.
Tick tock. Tick tock.

Soon.



This is a poetry prompt from Poets United.

14 dropped their thoughts:

Laurie Kolp | July 8, 2011 at 7:04 AM

I love this beautiful visual poem... a very creative use of the prompt.

Eileen T O'Neill ..... | July 8, 2011 at 8:44 AM

Very nice use of the Poetry Prompt. A living clock!!!

Eileen

Miss `Chievous | July 8, 2011 at 8:52 AM

That's sweet, Laurie. :}

Miss `Chievous | July 8, 2011 at 8:55 AM

Thanks, Eileen! :)

Sherry Blue Sky | July 8, 2011 at 7:01 PM

This is reallty clever!!!!!!! I read that woman doctor's book about her stroke and how it helped her understand the whole left side right side thing......"My Stroke of Insight" - there is a cool vidclip of her giving a talk about it on the net somewhere. Your poem reminded me of that.

Miss `Chievous | July 9, 2011 at 8:56 AM

Thanks, Sherry Blue Sky!! I would look that up. Personality thingies always interest me. :)

blackshirt13 | July 12, 2011 at 7:24 AM

I love it! Visual poems are quite rare to begin with, and this is just so.. I'm speechless. Great job! :)

Miss `Chievous | July 12, 2011 at 10:07 AM

Awww, thanks, sis!! Your comment made me happy. :)

poeformology | July 17, 2011 at 7:34 AM

I don't know why, but the adjective I'd use to describe your visual poetry would be 'orgasmic.' It was just that mesmerizing. Thank you. This made my day.

Sweetest in the Gale | July 17, 2011 at 9:08 AM

I loved this poem. My right brain and left brain are constantly battling each other for control, so I completely related to your words. Wonderful read!

Isabel | July 17, 2011 at 3:57 PM

love it.

themslvh | July 17, 2011 at 4:27 PM

That was a fun read! Fabulous!

Jingle | July 19, 2011 at 8:48 AM

creative.

Jingle | July 19, 2011 at 8:50 AM

do share with jingle poetry potluck today.

keep up the excellence.
cheers.

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