One Pre-Long Distance Relationship Evening
One Pre-Long Distance Relationship Evening
I could hear nothing but the crickets.
It's this time of the night that I am alive.
Not tonight, though.
He's with me, but not tonight.
I could hear nothing but my hearbeat.
It's one of these moments that it goes faster.
Not this time, though.
He's beside me, but not this time.
I could hear nothing but the loneliness in his voice.
It's a voice that could feather-tickle my heart.
Not this voice, though.
He's speaking, but not in that voice.
*This was a poetry prompt from Magpie Tales.
8 dropped their thoughts:
uhmm.. long distance relationship is really hard. I do love the this site look, wish I would learn how to pattern the free layout. its a big pain in the ass.hehehe
Yes, it is. But I'm up for it. Thanks, mach! You could try searching on btemplates.com. They've got tons. Editing it will test your patience, but the result is oh so good! :)
interesting, like the solidarity of her heart...with one but knows it is not the other...even if the other is just a voice right now...long distance love is surely hard...
Creative, imaginative take on the prompt...
together and alone, sometimes love is like that. nice magpie!
..'a voice that could feather tickle my heart' ..I like it.
Lovely Magpie tale.
I'm trying to recall if my heart has ever been feather tickled by a voice ... By George, I believe it has!
ooooh.. I could FEEL this. Excellent!
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