Magpie Mondays {Chairs and White Dresses}
Chairs and White Dresses
I'm finally walking away,
I finally mustered up all the courage to be alone.
With my made-up dream with you all broken,
like empty chairs scattered on the green fields.
But, I'll never be afraid to look back.
Never, if it means abandoning the man that I've always loved
And will always love.
It'll still be you and me, only different.
Written for Magpie Tales
9 dropped their thoughts:
Love it! That last line takes it to a whole other place.
Thanks, Mama Zen! :)
I like it. It's a real love, even if it's one-sided.
intriguing twist on the abandonment and the still being you and me just different....
Such a powerful and beautiful piece of writing....i love it!!!
Strong and haunting!
Love the last line!
Lots of good connections to the picture, but a good write all on its own. And real enough to me that I hope it all worked out. My Magpie this week is Goldilocks
love the 2nd stanza, well done.
:)
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