A Distressed Dramatical
Right Brain. Left Brain.
Tick tock. Tick tock.
Write. Create.
Tick tock. Tick tock.
Prose. Technical.
Tick tock. Tick tock.
Pleasure. Sacrifice.
Tick tock. Tick tock.
Eros. Storge.
Tick tock. Tick tock.
Soon.
♥
This is a poetry prompt from Poets United.
14 dropped their thoughts:
I love this beautiful visual poem... a very creative use of the prompt.
Very nice use of the Poetry Prompt. A living clock!!!
Eileen
That's sweet, Laurie. :}
Thanks, Eileen! :)
This is reallty clever!!!!!!! I read that woman doctor's book about her stroke and how it helped her understand the whole left side right side thing......"My Stroke of Insight" - there is a cool vidclip of her giving a talk about it on the net somewhere. Your poem reminded me of that.
Thanks, Sherry Blue Sky!! I would look that up. Personality thingies always interest me. :)
I love it! Visual poems are quite rare to begin with, and this is just so.. I'm speechless. Great job! :)
Awww, thanks, sis!! Your comment made me happy. :)
I don't know why, but the adjective I'd use to describe your visual poetry would be 'orgasmic.' It was just that mesmerizing. Thank you. This made my day.
I loved this poem. My right brain and left brain are constantly battling each other for control, so I completely related to your words. Wonderful read!
love it.
That was a fun read! Fabulous!
creative.
do share with jingle poetry potluck today.
keep up the excellence.
cheers.
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